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TROUBLE IN PARADISE
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Great model and really fantastic outfit, but a lot of 'issues'.
On the happy side - her wolf looks to be asking for a 'lick' ...
Fish? (Wolfy - you don't want to touch that fish) It looks like rubber, and a bit like a stock poser 3 fish from 21 years ago. You know the "fish - John West rejects...", yeah well that fish did not even make the markets.
Her arrow is far too long, too thick and the head (that size) would have sliced the fish in half (rubber must be holding it together. Arrow size = minus 45% (minimum). Orc arrow is good and almost instant kill (inch or so below the heart).
Right hand grip is wrong and looks all wrong. Try taking the thumb out and putting it on the arrow shaft. The right wrist/forearm looks wrong too (too thin proportionally).
Her eyes/line of sight are wrong. I would have her eyes focused on either the orc arrow, or her wolf to acknowledge his questioning look (are these bones all for me?)
Right leg is wrong (position and twist), although the rock and water hide most of that.
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I can't recall the exact number (either not listening or doing mischief in class) but Leonardo Da Vinci had between 8 & 13 tries at getting the Mona Lisa right (the official/final/biggest canvas).
Point being - the work was good enough to warrant perfecting, and sometimes that means several tries.
This scene, model and the dress ... deserve perfecting.
If it is a poser 3~6 fish, would use a flat texture. I have just knocked one up for you (with a bump). Option is to post (image) the UV map below/above as an attachment to your response ... then I'll use it as a base to create a custom (good/real) fish skin texture.
Cheers,
Rick.


On the happy side - her wolf looks to be asking for a 'lick' ...
Fish? (Wolfy - you don't want to touch that fish) It looks like rubber, and a bit like a stock poser 3 fish from 21 years ago. You know the "fish - John West rejects...", yeah well that fish did not even make the markets.
Her arrow is far too long, too thick and the head (that size) would have sliced the fish in half (rubber must be holding it together. Arrow size = minus 45% (minimum). Orc arrow is good and almost instant kill (inch or so below the heart).
Right hand grip is wrong and looks all wrong. Try taking the thumb out and putting it on the arrow shaft. The right wrist/forearm looks wrong too (too thin proportionally).
Her eyes/line of sight are wrong. I would have her eyes focused on either the orc arrow, or her wolf to acknowledge his questioning look (are these bones all for me?)
Right leg is wrong (position and twist), although the rock and water hide most of that.
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I can't recall the exact number (either not listening or doing mischief in class) but Leonardo Da Vinci had between 8 & 13 tries at getting the Mona Lisa right (the official/final/biggest canvas).
Point being - the work was good enough to warrant perfecting, and sometimes that means several tries.
This scene, model and the dress ... deserve perfecting.
If it is a poser 3~6 fish, would use a flat texture. I have just knocked one up for you (with a bump). Option is to post (image) the UV map below/above as an attachment to your response ... then I'll use it as a base to create a custom (good/real) fish skin texture.
Cheers,
Rick.


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