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3D Render by LovecraftianPenguinTrying a new approach to my uploads for this series, so please let me know what type you prefer. Text in image or the story left in the description?
Things are starting to heat up
Post work and text done in Affinity Photo2
The last image is a raw render for referance.
Poses are tweaked from Pushee-Ri's Cheeky Sitting - Poses for GF8
2nd attempt at an upload, so i forgot what i typed in here the 1st time, this is a rough but shorter version lol
Please let me know if you want a return to the story arc in this description area on in the images, Thanks !
Cheers for looking, LP
Things are starting to heat up

Post work and text done in Affinity Photo2
The last image is a raw render for referance.
Poses are tweaked from Pushee-Ri's Cheeky Sitting - Poses for GF8
2nd attempt at an upload, so i forgot what i typed in here the 1st time, this is a rough but shorter version lol
Please let me know if you want a return to the story arc in this description area on in the images, Thanks !
Cheers for looking, LP
Ah ... uhh ... shouldn't this be listed as SafeSite MATURE????
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Pushee-Ri
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Fri, Apr 18Oops - sorry: it is NSFW rated 
Not quite myself today
Thanks for the mention - and have a nice day

Not quite myself today

Thanks for the mention - and have a nice day

LovecraftianPenguin
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Fri, Apr 18You had me worried for a sec !! Especially as i had trouble uploading it ! Thanks for the heart attack though
lol

LovecraftianPenguin
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Fri, Apr 18as an aside what versions do you prefer ? text or no text and keep the story in the description ?
Thanks
Thanks

Pushee-Ri
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Fri, Apr 18Hmm ... difficult question and certainly a matter of personal taste. So here's just my personal opinion: I'm always irritated by speech bubbles - which are more familiar from drawn environments - when they appear in realistic settings.
Then there is the font (even if it is called Comic SF). For me personally, it doesn't really fit together.
On the other hand, it's a bit strange to see the pictures first and then read the story ... hmm, I think if I were to do something similar, I would put the story on the same level as the picture - and then not as a floating level, but with its own continuous background. For example, white text on a dark/black background, which then separates the text nicely from the image.
Sorry for the heart attack
Then there is the font (even if it is called Comic SF). For me personally, it doesn't really fit together.
On the other hand, it's a bit strange to see the pictures first and then read the story ... hmm, I think if I were to do something similar, I would put the story on the same level as the picture - and then not as a floating level, but with its own continuous background. For example, white text on a dark/black background, which then separates the text nicely from the image.
Sorry for the heart attack

LovecraftianPenguin
yeah i planned on doing the text versions first but then thought it might detract from views if they were showwn in the tumbnail, and i was after feedback so thats the reason they are "The wrong way round" 
But thanks for the feed back i'll bear this in mind for the next upload in the series
Cheers!!
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But thanks for the feed back i'll bear this in mind for the next upload in the series
Cheers!!
AshenPortfolio
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Fri, Apr 18Throwing in my two cents also, you could maybe do it like subtitles from a film, or text from a virtual novel. So you could make each scene with space at the bottom knowing that the text will go there or format it as such. It's a tough call.
LovecraftianPenguin
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Sat, Apr 19Ooooh thats an nice compromise, I like this idea i'll try and work it into the next set of render and see how it lands. Thanks !!
Wow thats awesome ,keep doing more . Me i like the no text version (but thats just me!) as you get to see the hard work
you did it just looks cleaner.
you did it just looks cleaner.
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Fri, Apr 18THanks so much for the feedback and i am leaning towards more NO TEXT versions, i do like to tell a tale and speach bubbles tend to be restrictive wwhen trying to convey the story..
Thanks again for the feedback !!
Thanks again for the feedback !!
Nice!
In terms of clean or captioned, you come across as more of the "story teller" type so I'd go with captions if you had to choose between clean and captioned when uploading.
In terms of clean or captioned, you come across as more of the "story teller" type so I'd go with captions if you had to choose between clean and captioned when uploading.
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Fri, Apr 18Thats for the vaulable feed back, and im glad you lie the story telling ! i will probably go back to clean renders with the story back in the description as i get more space to get into the story, although i may at some future date try a comic in the freebies section. we'll see 

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