Horrific Render Contest 2 (CLOSED) (CLOSED)

And you have a render of the first image? personally i like more that composition and if the woman look up to camera it maybe be a good improvement

Thank you for your feedback and criticism, I will take this into account ... about the render with the angle as in the first image-no, as for the angle, I think it's a matter of taste, someone likes it this way, someone else, but in any case, I will take into account