Awaiting Guests for Christmas (CLOSED)

Good work.
Hope the guests aren't in for a surprise to become an appetizer for the raven
Her spike earring could be made more vague not to become too yellowish, like the part of the wireframe light geometry.
The other flying raven in the air, making a turn, could use a motion blur on the wings to indicate movement (like you did
with the tree lights and on the candle flicker flames., rather than seeming to hang from the ceiling.
But don't mind me saying so, cause these were just an opinion.
Wish you good luck.
Hope the guests aren't in for a surprise to become an appetizer for the raven

Her spike earring could be made more vague not to become too yellowish, like the part of the wireframe light geometry.
The other flying raven in the air, making a turn, could use a motion blur on the wings to indicate movement (like you did
with the tree lights and on the candle flicker flames., rather than seeming to hang from the ceiling.
But don't mind me saying so, cause these were just an opinion.
Wish you good luck.
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LeylaA
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Fri, Dec 15, 2023Well, it is just a render, with no postwork on it. I may work on it if I feel it is worth my time or not. But you are right, if I want to make it worth posting on other websites I will make it as a keyshot.
drjivago
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Fri, Dec 15, 2023Yes, thank you as well for your reply. This is a minor issue anyway, what is more important is how
you reflected that atmosphere. In this case, very well.
Have a good day and good luck.
you reflected that atmosphere. In this case, very well.
Have a good day and good luck.