Treasure Hunter (CLOSED) (CLOSED)

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Legend says the Kadis relics, were forged by Celestial beings from a higher dimension. According to folklore, a full set of armour grants the wearer mythical powers. Lost through time and space, scattered throughout the galaxy only a handful of these items have been found.

Valera, a pirate treasure hunter following her mother's footsteps, has been chasing the relics since her mother's tragic murder. 
Determined to finish what her mother started; Valera have been in pursuit of locating the whereabouts of these highly prized items.

Valera's journey has now led her to Yemen IV, a dangerous rocky planet, infested with the ferocious Ravagers; giant sized insect-like creatures.
Her destination is an ancient temple lost amongst the caves and canyons, where a relic, The Soul Breaker, a legendary two-handed sword that was famed amongst the Kadis armoury, is said to have been hidden.


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Kensai

You could make use of the golden treasure on the ground by adding glowing gold color light emitting from the treasure, like you did with the light rays coming down from the top, but with more visbility of power source, including the light reflection on the tip of her gun . Your work is good overall.