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Tried Japanese horror... This was double-layered and edited in Gimp. Same for all my previous renders.
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WIREFRAME (Before changes to the head pose and yellow book's placement):

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WIREFRAME (Before changes to the head pose and yellow book's placement):

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Fantastic concept, reminds me of the covers of teenage ghost dramas. You have some different elements and characters positions on your render in contrast with your wire. Last hour changes or some photoshop edited? Because I like much more the faces on your last version.
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Way to go Ghost! You've got some one-off, quirky ideas coming lately. I think you divided your render into two sections as seen from the first render. The boy on the left seems to represent fire and light, while the girl on the right seems to represent the scene of darkness and snow... Sort of light and dark in harmony.... Best of luck with your concept.

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