VERY nicely done!

The atmosphere reminds me of those thrillers or film noirs from the 50s, I love it.

Excellent!  The kind of woman it's hard to be right with...

What if the boyfriend's lover is a boyfriend ???

I saw these yesterday (or possibly the day before) and I remember thinking they're both lovely. Different phases of the same idea. The eyes in the first edition are a little uncanny, but that makes her look even more wicked and like the type you really dun wanna mess with (firearm or not). I *really* like the lighting in the first version even though they're both lovely.