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i need feedback about Cici (CLOSED)

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rdaughterdazThu, Jul 31, 2025
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I need feedback and suggestions about the main character of my adult visual novel, Ciciespecially regarding her age, nationality, and most importantly, her personality.

When you see her picture, what can you suggest about her?
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HyxodThu, Jul 31, 2025
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Age maybe between 23 to 26 ? her face look early 20s but her body attributes make her look older so it's hard to choose.
Nationality... im not good with this so hopefully someone else can help you with this, the only thing i can say is that i don't think i've seen many dev talk about the nationality of their characters, for me it's not that important.
and for her personality well... i guess it depend what kind of AVN you want to make and what you want the story to be, everyone like different type of personality so you will obviously not be able to please everyone.
Again i don't know what kind of game you want to make but the most important thing is the story... your game can have bad graphics, 0 animations and slow update but if the story is trash, nobody will come back to see the next update...
but anyway, im sure you'll find your public whatever you choose to do, if you put your love into this project smile

Hyxod
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Thu, Jul 31, 2025
oh and also, DON'T forget music ahah
GrapeJuice3DThu, Jul 31, 2025
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She is very pretty, great job!
About her nationality i don't know why but she gives me European vibes, maybe English or French. smile
For her personality, I saw there's renders of her smiling but most of the time she look serious, I believe that's maybe because she is an introvert person and not the first one to talk, but after you know her, she is always friendly and very funny sometimes, like her last render in her product's page where she is making a funny face emote
Hope this helped

Luxe MuseThu, Jul 31, 2025
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All right, I would personally downsize the melons a little (sorry, I am joking). I would say she grew up in a lovely family. Her father taught her everything there is to know about survival. She is a gentle soul, but she can take apart the Ruger .22 caliber her father gave her for her twelfth birthday like a professional. And do not even try to match her marksmanship skills, not even her own father would dare.

She tried going vegan because of that crush of hers in college, but that did not work out, not only the diet but also the boy. Every weekend reminds her of the wonders of that skirt steak on the grill his mother calls churrasco, the smell of guava leaves his father uses to smoke his meat, a recipe handed down through generations, and common in the little town in Argentina, from which his grandparents emigrated just two generations before.
Luxe Muse
Karma: 9,329
Thu, Jul 31, 2025
Why Argentina? Her name is Cici, which in Spanish sounds like two "yeses" in a row. I imagine her mother chose this name to reflect the delight her father expressed upon learning of her arrival into the world. Additionally, Argentina is home to a large European community, including many of German and Italian descent, among others.
thirdeyezennicaiThu, Jul 31, 2025
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24, French/Irish, kind and gentle soul with a charming sense of humor but maybe a bit of sassy flair to it.

just my 50 cents on this emote


(btw, this indirectly reminds me to work on my character bios lmao)
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