So heres my 1st upload, The 1st pic has a little post work using Affinity Photo v2. 2nd is a raw render, was happy(ish) with it but then noticed that the lighting could have been a lot better hence the post work.
Please feel free to post any criticism, either good or bad. Just looking for any pointers on what i could do better from you all

Thanks for looking

(Very) Brief story:

Stacey was thrilled when she was asked out for a date by her college crush, Not so impressed with the destination of choice, Boys Eh?
Maybe next time he'll think of something a little more thoughtful, Game Arcades are a little too Retro for this girl, Maybe a movie or a sporting event next time!